Thunder collapse, drown through rising suns, faltering, flattering the down a lazy phoenix spread across the lawn,
holding
together a twilight curse that ended a long time ago, restless water
stirs on the edge of the rushes, dropping off to the glazing heat that
defeats a calm sleep.
Drips of wet make the earth shine, reflect the
distant pasts, memories that weren’t real to those present now, barely a
question in their lingering minds, halted by the hallowing screech of
the sun.
Slow breaths controlled their motions, waiting, watching stars fall away.
Rain pattered along the roads, wheels cranking and turning, yielding little results,
stuck in the glistening mud,
water striking against metal, their ears ringing with the closeness of hope. It was foretold to stop soon.
And then the real world would begin.
Light winds carried leaves, rustling trees into wild motions, bending and forming around themselves, dancers in reeds.
Swallowing
didn’t help. Streams flooded downriver, hills filled with water fell to
the sides, green oceans making patterns in the weather.
If someone
spoke, it was pointless. The thundering demanded attention, grabbing
their wills by the dozen, raising doubts in the tiny birds, clutching
their children tight to shield them from the coming storm—the current
one was bad enough, they should be glad they didn’t know what was
coming.
Shouts staggered them into motion, metal wet with mud,
clattered in brown and soaked to the core. Rummaging metal was heard as
they rose, the sun greeting them barely through a spark in between the
heavy clouds.Hope might be the only thing left to cling to. Hope might
be worth even greeting the sun one last time. The rain didn’t care to
give them any final wishes. They stood, counting the thunder in cracks,
beating them down before any fight had begun.
Thoughts:
One of the few decent mood pieces I've written so far, I think. It's
about a somewhat trite scene perhaps, if taken in the wrong context,
which is perhaps something I'm not immediately sure about (also the
reason why any references are very vague). Furthermore, there's a weird
mix of fantasy (phoenix, hills filled with water, twilight curse) and
something very real and close (rain pattered along the roads, rummaging
metal was heard), while still retaining an otherworldly quality.
Does it make sense? What do you imagine the scene as? Does that really matter?