Mix-up! I made it in Twine this time! Have a play/read:
Thoughts:
I didn't even intend for this to be in Twine when I first wrote
it. But man, I just felt it made so much more sense after I had written
it. It already had all the options built in and everything. And looping
it just gives it that final touch that makes it shine.
The language might be a little obtuse, even to the point where I don't necessarily understand everything, but I feel that's part of the point of the piece. So don't fret if it doesn't make complete sense. Life doesn't, you know?